One Sunny day it was nearly my friend's birthday. I was shopping in the city. It was fun in the mail.
The old man stepped onto the road in front speeding cards.
We are tomorrow finishing off our writing, so stay tuned for our final caption…...
Saturday, August 9, 2014
The Accident - Writing
This is writing activity helps the student to sequence their writing. The comic strip is used as a motivation to write a story. This is Nicole's interpretation.
One Sunny day it was nearly my friend's birthday. I was shopping in the city. It was fun in the mail.
After I went to the mail I saw an old man . He was holding a wooden stick. He was about to cross a busy road.
The old man stepped onto the road in front speeding cards.
Suddenly the old man was on the dangerous road . A car was coming . The driver pressed on the brakes. The car diver was scared that he would run the old man over.
We are tomorrow finishing off our writing, so stay tuned for our final caption…...
One Sunny day it was nearly my friend's birthday. I was shopping in the city. It was fun in the mail.
The old man stepped onto the road in front speeding cards.
We are tomorrow finishing off our writing, so stay tuned for our final caption…...
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ReplyDeleteWell done Nicole you have sequence your story in a logical manner. I liked how you mention about the dangerous road.
ReplyDeleteNext steps: I really wanted to know why the city was fun. Remember you are creating a picture for the reader in their heads. That idea could have extended about why you were having fun.
There are misspelt words that you have underlined in your draft writing ( well done). Some of them you could have independently corrected yourself by using a dictionary.
Keep up the great work.