Wednesday, May 13, 2015

The war

Once upon a time there was two boys called mark and jack there were two girls called Molly and Rebecca and don,t forget the pilot his name was James.All of these people went to war at the same time they all went to Mars.we had to take some things like helmets and food.Rebecca tried to make a motor bike but when we were at Mars it broke.Molly tried to make a ship it worked?All of the people hoped in it. The ship was huge.I could not look down it was terrifying . We flew to the moon it was amazing then we went to earth.When we were at our home I had a nap.I woke up we hade another mission so all of us went to Jupiter but everone got stuck in space.so everyone got out and worked as a team and pushed the ship out of the space goo.yes we have finished.so everyone went home.When I got home I had a present it was from my mum and dad I un wraped it .it was a helicopter I flew around the world I went to NewYork ahhhhhhh I crashed I did not no any one there embarysing I wanted to get home if turned around a free house . yaaaaaaayyyyyyy! I got the house then I got that house but I wanted a helicopter. I used it all the time. I did visit my mum and dad bye bye.


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